pool opening

pool opening

This year we are going to be having lots of fun because we have our new pool opened and a new changing room as well. Everyday the pool will be opened there will be lots of kids swimming,bombing and practising how to swim like breaststroke,backstroke and diving. Before the pool was opened a little girl had to cut a red ribbon so she can be allowed to swim in the pool. Once we all got in the pool we played a couple of games like fetching the rings and playing with the balls. The water was shiny as a crystal gem. The pool was so warm that all the kids wanted to stay in and not get out.

TITLE: Going to rainbow end

Planning

1.Got ready

2.Had breakfast

3.brushed my teeth

4.Drove to Rainbow end

5.Arrived there and went on the rides

Writing                   

“Woohoo” I jumped up in an excitement I quickly raced to my wardrobe pulled out the clothes that I wanted to wear. I put my cloths on and then I went to close my wardrobe. Then I went to put my black and white shoes on and then zoomed off to the kitchen.

Then I walked to the kitchen and smelt a delicious smell of flounder. I licked the creamy butter off the pan then I went to gently pick up the flounder. Then took the bones out of it so I don’t choke. Then I munched the rest of flounder in my mouth. When I got full I went to the bathroom and brushed my teeth and wash my face.

When I got to the tub I got my tooth brush and put some toothpaste on it. Then I scrubbed my teeth so they can be shiny and brilliant. Then I got some mouth wash and made my breath smell fresh as a baby’s breath. Then I went to go and pack all my stuff in the car and then buckled myself in and took off.

When we arrived at Rainbow end I jumped out of the car like a bouncing rabbit. Then I quickly ran to the entries and went to the counter. Then dad went to get out his cash and pay for us and bought wristbands. So then I told dad “ dad can we go on the big roller-coaster” then he replied “okay then come on” so then we went on the roller-coaster and was going up and down all around. Them when the park shut down we went home.

Marking

Ideas	Points	Comment
	3	Lots of simple ideas about the topic but there is no detail
miss Baker	3	Some simple ideas with a little bit of detail

The volcano

Volcano

The volcano is ready to burst out its lava. Its ready to boil its lava to boost off. The rocks a blasting in the air then onto the ground. The volcano was bubbling high across the sky. The lightning streak over the horizontal.

kawa of care

In room 6 we made a kawa of care to keep our chromebooks safe. We have to look after our chromebooks because so we can work on them.